美国大学申请ESSAY的写作一直是申请者们关注的热点问题。美国大学的申请ESSAY提供给申请者留下的思考空间非常广阔，基本上不会有什么限制，ESSAY给了我们一个环境，那么怎么去“种”这朵“花”，那是你自己的事情了。
然而，很多学生依然拘泥于修饰，这可能跟小学以来养成写作习惯于赞美的缘故，华而不实的居多，那么如何准备美国大学申请ESSAY？不妨先进行角色转换，假如自己是一个美国人，美国人习惯对人进行赞美，但解决问题或者进行叙事论述，他们确实喜欢的是直接，喜欢论据。下面，跟着我们一起来欣赏一篇非常有创意的ESSAY。
范文：A Boy’s Firsts
The boy is such a common boy. He is so common that only acquaintedfriends can notice him among the crowd; he is so common that he does not changehis girlfriend one time per month, just as those playboys do; and he is socommon that his daily life is no more special than those who listen to rock n’roll, bet for soccer games and seldom clean their rooms.
However, the boy is somewhat special.
He usually thinks that, his experience and personal achievements,along with his own happiness and grievances, are enough for him to be unique,though he does not have a face as good-looking as Brad Pitt or Keanu Reeves, orwhoever.
First Award
It was such a surprising gift for a 12-year-old boy to know that hehad won the first prize in the national mathematics competition. The boyclutched the certification and laughed like a sun-flower blooming in a springmorning. He had spent three months preparing for that competition and hadlost5kgweight but he was very happy, as happy as you could imagine. Enjoyingthe pace of enterprising, he began to believe “No pain no gain” that afternoon.
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